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Hi!
My name is Carolyn Graham. I am from outside of Philadelphia, near Blue Bell. I am a sophomore here at Penn State and am a marketing major. I am in a sorority, Phi Mu, and am also involved in THON. I love being with my friends and family. If you want to know anything else just ask!

I'm not sure where to comment on your speech, so I'm just gunna do it here. If you want it elsewhere, feel free to delete it or tell me I suck or something. I won't be offended. Hey. Great topic choice! I love Lennon, The Beatles, Imagine, etc. You relly supported your arguements well. You threw in little details in all the right places, and you really helped to describe to everyone what a chill guy John Lennon was. Awesome job. - Nate Scarbrough

John Galvin-Carolyn i really liked your speech and i like john lennon's work as well. I think you had a really good intro, which made the rest of your essay very easy to follow. You also introduced your visuals very well into the speech, avoiding awkward transitions. You didn't seem nervous at all. The only advice i would say is you listed a lot of the techniques that Lennon used, e.g. parallelism without really explaining what his purpose was. Overall, great job though.

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