Mike's Speech Outline

Comments:

Michael Chiang: Your pace and your eye contact was consistent. Your transitions and flow were very smooth. Your speech really hit the exigence, constraint and audience. Good references during your speech.

Alex: You seemed really well-prepared and knowledgeable about your subject matter. It was a really good speech. Next time speak a little louder.

Derek: You had great eye contact throughout the speech, and kept a steady pace. You clearly spent time practicing your speech and it showed, so props on that, Great Job

Carolyn: Nice speech, Mike! I really liked your introduction, the way you gave us a vision. You had good eye contact and a great pace. Perhaps a little more inflection would help, but overall your speech was very well done and had a solid conclusion as well.

Joe DeArmitt: Hey great job on your speech, you gave a lot of information, you had great eye contact, and a good ending statements. I would work on speaking up just a little bit.

Sarah Dunning: Great opening! It seemed as though you knew the information and speech really well! For next time, maybe you could try to focus on the entire audience a little more and vary your eye contact. you made your information very clear and you had a great lay out! Great job!

Liz Peters: I liked your speech. You did a great pacing yourself and delivering the information! You had a great transition from audience into constraints so use more like that one in your next speech. Try working on speaking louder because it was a little hard to hear you from the back of the room. Overall good job!!

Scot Brown: You gloss over the Cuban Missile Crisis, and the impact of Kennedy's handling of it. What is not clear from your speech, is if Kennedy resolved our issues in a peaceful manner, why is it that under him we got the closest this country has even been to all out nuclear war? Just a thought. And work on pronunciation, and clarity of voice.

Michael's Speech 2 Outline

Comments:

Quan,Zou: First I am really interested in your vedio. Your vedio is humorous and explained your topic pretty well. Also your speech speed keeps really well and your content is good enough to support your whole speech. Great job!

David Oh: Good choice on picking the video as your visual aid. Your speech was clear with no fillers. You voice was loud enough but I felt that it would have been better if the tone of your voice changed time from time. Eye contact was lacking at first, but it got better so good job on that. Overall, I enjoyed your speech. Good job!

Michael Chiang: Hey, i really liked your speech. I think the video that you showed really grabbed our attention. Your tone was steady and did not fluctuate too much. Try to sound more enthusiastic about your topic? Not really sure how to say it. Good solid main points and clear enough for me to know when you changed topics. Good speech

Scot Brown: Don't hold your notes (especially full pages of paper), when you speak! It makes you seem unprepared and insecure. Just put the notes down on the podium. This frees up you to use your hands and gesture, and contributes to an overall expressiveness, and a positive and confident body language.

PAPER ONE

 "Values That Last A Lifetime"

Paper Two

"Diversity Day"

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